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Stories

Getting Bored with all AJ non-sense?
Needing some time to relax and read a short yet Awesome story?
You've come to the right page!
Here are stories that include Random stuff, Real stuff and sometimes, Seriously Crazy introductions..

So..
First story is about a Warrior Cat named RavenPaw here's the story!
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Ravenpaw's Story
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Ravenpaw was an ordinary cat in a village, His used-to-be name was Raven. Raven was a poor cat, he was living in a small cottage with his step-mom and a step sister and step brother..

~:~Flashback!~:~

Raven's father was a warrior in a castle, he quit the job since he was almost killed during war between them and there enemies, just one day, his wife died, he remarried to Raven's step mother now, he died of cancer, and that was when Raven promised that she'll see him again.

~:~ Back to the present ~:~

"What?!" A war is going on again, booms and bangs here and there. Almost everyone couldn't sleep. "Raven! Get my shoes!" "Raven clean the house while we're away!" Is all Raven can hear in there house while the war is going on.. She did what she was told to do, she didn't thought about anything except one thing. Meeting her dad one last time, or even better, always being with him.

Raven was surprised that a note came to her, it said that her step-sister and step-brother and stop-mother are dead. She was all alone, so, she went to the castle.

~:~ At the Castle ~:~

"I would like to be a castle guard!" yelled Raven, "Raven, you poor girl can't even handle a boy! Imagine, 'Raven, the worthless cat!' you're just worthless!" "You can't specific words twice in one sentence, and I am NOT worthless!" replied Raven, "Like ever! Ha ha ha ha!" giggled the clerk.

~:~ Back to the house ~:~

Raven went to the house and dressed up as a soldier cat. She went out and fought. She discovered a bloody journey was ahead of her and she was prepared. She did everything her dad could have done.

Just 3 days before her 18th birthday, she was killed by an ambush attack. When she went up to heaven, she saw her dad and brother and sisters, she hugged them and that was when she realized she had fulfilled her promise. She also learned that Families can be together forever.

~:~ Earth ~:~

"Here lies, Ravenpaw, the most successful warrior cat. Raise your hats for Ravenpaw, the Real Warrior Cat!" And rejoice was all over the Warrior Cat territory, and Raven, now Ravenpaw, is smiling with her Family..

And what about the clerk you say? The clerk new that Raven was just pretending to be one. He let her try and do it. And then, just two words spoke out of his mouth looking to the sky. "I'm sorry." That is what he said. He was sorry for not letting her get a chance. And she did. Another two words spoke out of his mouth "Thank you." Yup. Thank you Ravenpaw for saving us all. Is what was in his mind.

~:~ Heaven ~:~

And as Ravenpaw's Family walked along the clouds. Ravenpaw said.
"I love you."
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Scar The Brave
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It was a mystical night at the Village of the Dragons, A Dragon priest named Drinyos, who was at the Magnificent Temple made by Dragon-hands as a gift for the Evil Dragon Emperor, Drinyos was praying to there Emperor to Stop torturing the citizens.  As the Emperor Made a reply, a Dragon was born. His name was "Scar", Scar was a Handsome young dragon admired by a lot of girl dragons. Just 3 days before his 18th Birthday, His Dad, The Priest, was about to die. Seconds before he died, Drinyos told  Scar to come.  Scare flew to the Bed in time. "Son.. Me, as I am about to die, Am here to tell you something, Here is a Scar-Amulet, it is an heirloom from years and years. This amulet is said to protect and Make strong the Chosen one, I believe in you, and You are the Chosen one, You are ..." Just when he was about to complete his sentence, he died. He cried and said "Dad, I promise, I will protect myself and my citizens. I will protect them against the evil Emperor." He flew to the emperor and said "Evil Emperor! I challenge you to a fight! If I win, You bring back my Dad and you will go out of this Village Forever and never return! And if you win, you could take everyone including me." Everyone who heard it was surprised. They said "Oh my! A brave dragon he is to sacrifice his life!" The Evil Emperor said "Challenge Accepted weakling. You won't win, I know you are just gonna die, I am, The emperor, and I am Stronger then Anyone!" "Let the Challenge begin." Said Scar. Everyone Gathered around to watch them fight. The Emperor attacked him first with fire blazing breath. Luckily Scar dodge it and he was safe, He flew up and tried to hit the Emperor, but he moved just a second he was about to hit the Emperor. "Ha ha Weakling. You can't defeat me!" Said the Emperor. For hours, They were fighting. Finally, The Emperor got Scar and hit him to the ground. "Ha ha! I win Scar the 'Brave'! Just wait 'ti-" Just before he said the word. Scar rose up with glowing Eyes and scars. He unleashed his secret power from the Scar-Amulet and Defeated the Emperor. And so, Everyone cheered and Peace was back in Dragon Village.
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The Good Phantom, Greely
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It was A Peaceful Morning at Jamaa, And Phantoms were trying to Plan for The Destruction of Jamaa. Some Phantoms were trying to Reproduce more Phantoms. One Phantom Reproduced a Good Phantom, Which is Typically our Subject of the Story. As he grew Older, The Evil Phantoms Became Annoyed, Even though, He was Kind enough to help Destroy Jamaa, Surprised To help Destroy Jamaa? Why? You may Ask, This is the Answer, He thought It was a Plan to get All gems in Jamaa You see, His Name is Greedy, He has this Black Part in his Heart where Greed Is Stored, And Sometimes, His Black part Gives him the
"Evil Eye" Most Phantoms are scared, Since he has a "RED Eye" You See, Again, Red eyed Phantoms are the Most Meanest and Nastiest, But Greedy here is not Nasty. "Greedy! If you want to have every Gem of Jamaa, Get that Laser Tube!" Said the Leader of Phantoms, "Ok!" Greedy Said as he Went to get the Laser Tube...
"Hmmm... I wonder what's this Laser Tube For...." He thought as he Gave it to the Leader, "Ummm... Mr. Leader, Sir, May I ask you Something?" He asked. "Not now Greedy, I'm Busy." The Leader Replied. "Don't worry, It'll be Quick" Greedy Said "Fine" The Leader Answered, "What is it?"
"What are those Parts for? Like the Laser Tube, The Magic-Repelling Gun and A protective bubble?
"Well, Uhh... Oh! It's for our Magic-Repelling-Never-to-be-destroyed-Magnet! You see Greedy, This Is a Magic Repelling Magnet that can't be destroyed by Magic, Only By The Hands of Man! And it gets all the Gems in Jamaa" Said the Leader as he was Trying not to fool Greedy, Did You know that The Leader was also Afraid of Greedy? "Oh Yes!" Greedy Was Rejoicing!
Then Weeks Later, The Machine was Finished.....

"YES!! THE MACHINE IS FINISHED! WE CAN TAKE OVER JAMAA! WE CAN DESTROY THEM AND MAKE OUR OWN LAND, WE WILL MAKE JAMAASIANS OUR SERVANTS!"
Cried The Leader, "Sir! You Forgot! Greedy!"
"And... Umm... TAKE ALL OF THE GEMS OF JAMAA!"
Shouted The Leader, Almost Forgetting about Greedy, And Soon, They Destroyed Jamaa, They were Joyful and made our ancestors Servants,
One day, Greedy asked The leader, "Sir, Where are my Gems?" With that Menacing Red eye on The Leaders Face. "Uh-oh....." "How dare you! Did you only plot for the Destruction of Jamaa, And not for Gems?!?!?" He Angrily Questioned the Leader, "Hold it Right there, Mr. Greedy Pants!" Said the Giant Phantom Leader of all Phantoms, "I have Pity on you, Rather then to Make you Disappear into ashes in front of All who is here, I will do this! I will let you Live, But rather in Jamaa! Then you will learn to Be A Jamaasian! But we will Hunt you, Day and Night, Afternoon, Every Moment And Second, You cannot get away from us. I will make you a Wolf, And you shall now be not Greedy anymore but you will be Greely!"

Then, Soon, A Stranger wolf was found in Jamaa, One of the first Wolves to come here in Jamaa, Of course, Greedy, Now called Greely, has still the red eye.. And Sometimes he is also Greedy, But, He has (And Always have) Kindness in his Heart.
 

Now, As what They say.

Greely, the reluctant wolf Shaman, puts his creepy cleverness to use in the study of animal magic. He is definitely on the side of good and righteousness, but he plays by his own rules. He speaks in to-the-point sentences, even to new animals, and has a certain amount of disdain for the other Shaman leaders. The only higher power that Greely respects is the Sky Mother, Mira. Greely is a powerful warrior against the phantoms in Animal Jam; they fear him most of all, because he is so much like them. He is the link to the darker side of the Animal Jam mythology. He has theories about where the phantoms came from and he may even know the location of a few undiscovered spirit stones. ~Ancient AJ Legend  
(Credits to Snowyclaw)

Read the Highlighted,
This is Why Greely is so much like The Phantoms.


And so this Concludes,
Not ALL phantoms can be Bad, And That Greely Really Did come from Phantoms.
Turns out, Once he was Doing a Good Job at Jamaa, Shamans Found him and reported Immediately to Mira to make Him Shaman. And Mira Made a Lair, A secret Lair in Coral canyons.. Most Don't know but as they Say, When you Break the Bridge in Coral Canyons, The Lair will open and Greely will Come out.

Here is a Picture of Greely's Wolf Cave:

Does he Live here? Or does he Not?
Who knows! Let it be known later on....

The End.
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The Forgotten Story
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(Credits to JazztheKat)
Nobody remembered what had really happened after Zios and Mira disappeared in thin air. It was as if they never existed in this world...it was as if nothing terrible had happened against the two gods and the shamans. It was as if those tales of the mighty gods and shamans were all fake. Everything seemed... Forgotten. Or was it?
Sir Gilbert and his close brother like friend Greely were standing side by side as they were gazing up at the magnificent statue of their god... Zios. The statue was taking over half a year but it was worth it. There were jades, emeralds, diamonds and other precious stones stuck to the statue that was made with great detail. The statue itself was made of gold! The other shamans were off to work while these two were having a small break from their every day work and admired and relaxed the beautiful statue. Sir Gilbert was getting used to Greely, the wolf himself did indeed helped him defeat the phantoms when everything seemed it was about to end. The two got used to calling each other 'brother'. Gilbert smiled as he spoke, "The Statue is almost done, my brother. Soon enough the town will feast and have a big ceremony to honor Zios himself!" Greely didn't smile but you could tell that he was happy because from how happy his voice sound, "I am happy for the idea of the ceremony. It's strange how Mira and Zios never seem to visit us that much now...do you think I'm doing something wrong?" Gilbert smirked as he elbowed his best friend in the ribs playfully, "Don't worry. You're the shaman of the year! Zios chooses you for a reason!" Greely smiled sadly back at him friend...ever since he had joined the shamans it seemed like the gods had favorite him out of them all. He was worried about what the tiger would think...this was his fith year being the top shaman and Gilbert used to be the one who was top shaman before he came! But Sir Gilbert only seemed to smile as his white deadly teeth glisten like pearls. 
THE NIGHT OF THE CEREMONY
"The Statue is now...completed!" Peck announced as trumpets played their melody. The streets were filled with colorful candles and there were flowers and paper decorations in every corner of the land of Jamma. Everyone was wearing their best clothes and the scent of fresh food filled the summer sky. There was music, dancing, laughter, singing, clapping, stomping and any other sound you could think of going at once! The Shamans were enjoying themselves until they noticed it was about time for them to meet the two gods in the small statue of their goddess, Mira. It was another time for the Gods to choose who the next top Shaman was...and Greely noticed how his close friend Gilbert was acting so impatient. The shamans entered the small temple that held the statue of their goddess and they were greeted by an annoyed god and a quiet goddess. "You're late." Zios muttered as he stood before the shamans. The shamans frowned, their god didn't looked pleased even though they were having a ceremony just for him and his wife! They even spent over a year of their lives to build his own statue! The shamans were quiet as stone as Zios continued, "You fools spend over a year for a party! How foolish! I have created you all to make this world a safe and protected place! And look have what you done...spending one year of your precious time...FOR A STUPID PARTY?!" Everyone flinched from his words. Mira was frowning towards her husband from his actions but said nothing. Zios sigh as he walked towards Greely, "Greely, I have chosen you for a reason, my boy. You have disappointed me. As top shaman you should know your responsibilities! What have you been thinking?! My wife and I have chosen you from how smart you were! You should be ashamed of yourself! I should have ordered Gilbert to have you killed back in the temples when he had first meet you..."Greely stood his ground as the god slowly walked back towards hi wife. The god continued to say terrible things about the wolf shaman and even pushed him to the ground once or twice to humiliate him from his failures! He didn't say a word for he knew if he spoke he would get in more trouble. "All of you disappointed me. You all are an example of selfish animals that only think about partyin-!" "Stop!" Everyone turned and faced Gilbert. The tiger had enough of being lectured by the god and yowled, "If you hadn't noticed, my lord, we have been working our tails off to protect this city! We were making the statue to honor of you creating us all! We were having a feast and party to celebrate after all our hard work and to celebrate you two! And this is how to repay us?! Spitting at us and telling my brother that I should have KILLED him?! I believe we should have just never celebrated for you...you rude...I can't even say the words! You are not even a god to me now!" Zios immediately threw the tiger away from him, making Gilbert crash and fall to the floor emotionless. Even though Zios was known to be all creation...he was not the nicest. He was strong and he was seen cold heart ed in the outside just to protect the animals he cared for...it was for his own people's good. He needed to look strong in the outside so his enemies would not attack his people that easily! Problem was, through this technique the god himself was growing colder and colder and even his kind wife couldn't even stop him from growing powerful and meaner. Sir Gilbert began to fight Zios...a god! Zios was impressed by how strong the tiger became from just from a little cub. Even the god had trouble fighting off the half god tiger. All the shamans were half gods but Sir Gilbert seemed the strongest! There were clashes of blades and claws and bits of blood fell to the ground. There were screams and shouts and Zira tried to stop the two but got knocked out herself from one of the god's big heavy wings. The other shamans tried to stop Gilbert from how much he was hurting the god...but it was no use for the tiger was so concentrated to much to their horror...on killing the god! After the long battle the temple itself was crashed into pieces with the god and half god's attack moves. And soon enough the god was killed, the ceremony came to a canceled and to Mira's horror Gilbert ordered the animals to destroy the statue. Mira was silent for the whole entire time as she watched the animals knock down the statue. Several of the jewels flew off to other worlds the animals had not yet discovered and those stones are know known as today the spirit stones which would bring new animals if an animal finds them. All the animals were sad and depressed from their god's death and many hated Gilbert.Mira was still silent and didn't visit the animals that much from then but did not bring in any revenge but cried tears of sadness and hatred. These tears created the creatures that we now know as phantoms today. Before the day of chaos ended Greely turned to look at her close friend and asked quietly, "Why have you killed Zios? He was our god!" Gilbert only answered him plainly, "You are a loyal friend, Greely. You care and respect all animals of Jamma. And I believe you are not worth treated terribly like how Zios treated you in the temple. We don't deserve a god who has a cold heart." "But he...!" "Cosmo had a vision. He told me that he saw Zios destroying all of us...he killed you painfully the most. If I had not killed Zios you would sooner or later be dead and same for the other animals. It was for our own good. I know I have done one of the most terrible things in history and really, I do not care if I am seen as a bad animal...for I knew I did it for the animals that I care and love. And also," The tiger turned to face the wolf and smiled sadly, "You are my close friend, Greely. And I do not want you to be treated that way and get killed."

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